Card spoilers sheet - crowdsourcing the proofreading

Missing info for Promo Gloomweaver-

Setup:
At the start of the game out Gloomweaver’s villain character cards into play, Skinwalker side up.
Search the villain deck for the card Pouch of Bones and put it into play. Shuffle the villain deck.

HP on Skinwalker side:
50

Keywords for Skinwalker side:
Villain, Zombie

Gameplay for Skinwalker side:
The first time a non-villain target is destroyed each turn, play the top card of the villain deck.
When Gloomweaver would be destroyed, flip Gloomweaver’s villain character cards, instead.
At the end of the villain turn, Gloomweaver deals the non-villain target with the second lowest HP H minus 1 melee damage.

Advanced for Skinwalker side:
Increase damage dealt by villain targets by 1

HP on side: 100

Keywords for the Rotting God side:
Villain

Gameplay for the Rotting God side:
When flipped to this side, Gloomweaver’s maximum HP is 100. Restore Gloomweaver’s current HP to 100.
At the start of the villain turn Gloomweaver deals each target H infernal damage.
Whenever a Cultist is destroyed, play the top card of the villain deck.
Whenever a target is destroyed, Gloomweaver regains 2 HP.
At the end of the villain turn, Gloomweaver deals each non-hero target H minus 2 infernal damage.

Advanced for the Rotting God side:
At the end of the villain turn, play the top card of Gloomweaver’s deck

Missing info for Promo Spite-

HP on Agent of Gloom side:
90

Setup:
At the start of the game, put Spite’s villain character cards into play, Agent of Gloom side up.
Remove all 5 drug cards from the villain deck and put them face down in the villain play area. Search the villain deck for the card safe house and put it into play. Shuffle the villain deck.

Gameplay for Agent of Gloom side:
At the start of the villain turn, if there are H cards under the safe house, flip Spite’s villain character cards. If not, flip a drug face up.
Whenever a lab raid would be played, discard it instead and spite deals each hero target 2 melee damage.
At the end of the villain turn, Spite deals the hero target with the highest HP H infernal damage. If there are more cards under the safe house than drugs face up, flip a drug face down.

Advanced for Agent of Gloom side:
At the end of the villain turn, flip a drug face up

HP on Broken Vessel side:
90

Gameplay for Broken Vessel side:
Increase damage dealt by Spite by 1 for each card under the safe house.
Whenever a card is placed under the safe house card, 1 player may draw a card.
Whenever a victim is destroyed, Spite deals each hero target 1 psychic damage.
Whenever a lab raid would be played, discard it instead and Spite deals each hero 2 melee damage.
At the start of each hero turn, that player may remove a card from under the safe house and put it into play. If they do, they may play card.
At the end of the villain turn, Spite deals the hero target with the lowest HP H minus 1 melee damage.

Advanced for Broken Vessel side:
At the end of the villain turn, destroy a victim

Wager Master's What do you really know? has a typo in the sheet, there's a j in villain in the second sentence!

V5 Baron Blade review:

Genetically Fused Physique flavor text has a typo and should be this:
“With my body as a canvas, I paint the death of all heroes!”

  • Baron Blade, Exordium #3

Negation Bands flavor text has a typo and should be this:
“Absolution’s might, drained? What infernal magics does the mad Baron command?!”

  • Fanatic, Vengeance #3

Regression Darts card text has a typo and should be this:
Baron Blade deals the 2 Hero targets with the highest HP 1 toxic damage each.
Targets dealt damage this way cannot deal damage until the start of Baron Blade’s turn.

Vengeful Assault flavor text has a minor typo with Baron not being capitalized.

V5 Ermine review:

No issues

V5 Friction review:

Highbrow flavor text has a typo and should be this:
“Try not to over think it, hon. I can already see you’re overdoing it. Tsk.”

  • Highbrow, Vengeance #5

Shock Dampeners flavor text has a typo and should be this:
“You must protect the dampeners. Otherwise, your speedsuit will be your coffin!”

  • Baron Blade, Vengeful Five One-Shot

Unchecked Acceleration is missing end quote in the flavor text

V5 Fright Train review:

No issues

V5 Proletariat review:

Defensive Formation has a typo in the card text and should be this:
Reduce damage dealt to the Proletariat with the lowest HP by X, where X = the number of Proletariats in play.

Flanking Maneuvers has typo in the card text and should be this:
Whenever the Proletariat character card deals damage to a Hero target, the clone card with the lowest HP deals the Hero target with the highest HP 1 melee damage.
Flanking Maneuvers also has a typo in the flavor text and should be this:
“Just when I thought the giant guy yelling train things wsa the worst of my problems…”

  • The Naturalist, Vengeance #3

Share in the Struggle has a typo in the card text and should be this:
Reveal cards from the top of Proletariat’s deck until 2 clone cards are revealed. Put them into play. Shuffle the other revealed cards into Proletariat’s deck.

This includes reviewing the Villain character cards for them as well

Awesome! updated.

The last line of Bloodsworn Colosseum should read:

"This Card and the Crowd's Favor card are indestructivle.  This card, the crowd's favor coard, and title cards are not Hero, Villain, or environment cards.

 

Currently it claims that title cards are indestructible.

 

Prime Warden Captain Cosmic should read:

Power: Until the start of your next turn, whenever a construct card is destroyed, you may shuffle it into your deck instead and either draw a card or play a card.

Thanks for the Colosseum catch; I know that I need to go back and check the actual promo cards against the early spoilers. A project at work ended early today, so I have time tomorrow I didn't expect. At least a little bit will get devoted to that. (I'll probably also grab an unproofed hero or villain deck & update myself.)

If you look over my review from the title deck that's what I have listed for Bloodsworn Colliseum https://greaterthangames.com/comment/93621#comment-93621

 

 

And that means I missed it when I was putting those in. Appropriate credit all around.

I just read over Parse. Not too much to report.

General note: I don’t understand the capitalization conventions. Eg, why is “projectile” capitalized on Targeting Arrow but not on Impossible Shot?

Between the Lines: There should be a newline between the two sentences in the rules text. In the flavor text, “centimetres” should be spelled using the international spelling.
Critical Multiplier: There should be a newline between the two sentences in the rules text.
Data Mining: In the flavor text, there’s a missing exclamation point: “What have you done?!”
Extrasensory Awareness: In the flavor text, there’s an extra s in “weaknesses”.
Impossible Shot: The first word in the flavor text should be “How”, not “Now”.
Quick Calculation: In the flavor text, there should be a space after the ellipsis, like “quite the… thingamajig”.
Recompile: There should be a newline between the two sentences in the rules text.
Segmentation Fault: The rules text is bold in the spreadsheet for some reason.

The Sentinels review:
Flavor text for Caliginous Form and Coordinated Assault need to be switched

Coordinated Assault card text has a typo and should be this:
One of your Hero Targets deals 1 Target X Melee Damage, where X = the number of your active Hero Character cards plus 1.

Hippocratic Oath flavor text should be this:
“So, now that’s over. Let’s all just get along, ok?”
Dr. Medico, Cosmic Challenge

The Naturalist review:

Natural-Born Vigor flavor text has a typo and should be this:
“Do not rely on your powers. They are merely tools, and all tools can fail.” The Naturalist, Vengeance #3

This included reviewing the character cards as well

Because "projectile" (and "irreducible" for that matter) shouldn't have been capitalized on Targeting Arrow. I'm shooting for consistently capitalizing hero/villain names and Hero, Villain, and Environment when referring to the appropriate decks and targets.

Segmentation Fault was bolded because Google Docs won't let me have some of the text in a cell bold and some not, the way it appears on a card. There are a few others throughout that have that happen, mostly cards that grant powers to heroes.

Edit to add: Also, other keywords like Equipment or Ongoing should be consistently capitalized.

Yippee-yi-yo-ki-yay, heroes are all done!

Ambuscade review:

No issues found

La Capitan review:

Advanced rules for Split Across Time side should be this:
The first time La Capitán would be dealt Damage each round, redirect that Damage to the non-Villain Target with the highest HP.

Iron Legacy review:

Iron Justice has a typo in the flavor text and should be this:
“Brute Force is all you savages understand!”
-Iron Legacy, The Final Legacy #4

The Dreamer review:

Macabre Specter has a typo in the card text and should be this:
At the end of the Villain turn, this card deals each non-Villain Target 2 Psychic Damage.
Whenever a Target other than this card is destroyed, restore this card to its maximum HP.

Kismet review:

No issues found

Miss Information review:

“Explosion” in the Lab flavor text has a typo and should be this:
“Ok, I didn’t put that fork in there…”
-Unity, Administrative Assassin #1

Concealed Betrayal card text should be this:
At the end of the Villain turn, destroy 1 Hero Ongoing or Equipment card.
At the start of the Villain turn, each Player may discard any number of their cards. If (H) cards are discarded this way, destroy this card.

Powerhound, you have been on a roll! Many thanks for your hard work - it's about to get noted in the change log.

Is that all the decks?

I believe so.

Regular Haka's incaps have a typo.  His first incap ability should be "One hero may play a card now" rather than "One hero may draw a card now."  

On Mask of the Matriarch, I believe it should be "from the center to the sea" in the flavour text.

Got my WotC and knew there was at least one error on the sheet but waited until I could double check the final versions.

 

Prime Warden Haka

Power: Play a card. If that card has "Haka" in the title, select one target to gain the benfit of your discarding. you may apply the effects to a target other than Haka.

 

 

Wager Master

"At the start of the villain turn, if there are H minus 2 or more face-down villain cards in play, flip Wager Master's villain character cards.

Condition cards and face-down villain cards are indestructible.

At the end of the villain turn, put X hero cards from play back into their players' hands, where X = the number of face-down villain cards in play."

 

Not All He Seems

"""You won. Go ahead - It's all yours, t. That is, if you think you can understand it.""

-The Scholar, Freedom Five Annual #23"

That's a fullstop instead of a comma

 

The New Deal

"""Look, friend. Y[s]y[/s]ou and I are clearly cut from the same cloth. What do you say to a truce?""

-Wager Master, The Best Book! #3"

 

Unanswerable Question

"""Ha ha ha, that was a lucky guess, my friend! Ready for the next question?""

-Wager Master, Endgame #2"

 

Who Are You Fighting?

There's an extra N in the title!

"When this card enters play, each player draws a card and each Target regains 2 hp.

If Wager Master is reduced to 0 or fewer hp, the heroes lose the game."

 

All of Wager Master's cards say Condition, Ongoing rather than Ongoing, Condition

 

 

Guise

 

Lemme See That…

Extra space between "That" and "…" in the Title

 

X-treeeeeeeeme!!!

(congrats on getting the right number of 'E's in X-Treeeeeeeeme!!)

"It's hard to tell if I'm the most awesome, or the most extreme. Probably both. [s]Or both.[/s]

Damage dealt by Guise is irreducible and cannot be redirected.

At the start of your turn, destroy this card.

"

 

Dok'Thorath Capital

 

Defiant Looters

There are many ways the rebels resisted the Tthorathian military authority. They took up arms, they sheltered the weak, and they reapproproated military supplies.

 

Orbital Bombardment

Is not in Alphabetical order!

 

Thorathian Military

"Reduce damage dealt to this card by 1.

At the end of the environment turn, this card deals each non-Tthorathian target 2 energy damage."

 

Each authority platoon is made up of a number of "regular" Tthorathian soldiers, led and augmented by an empowered Tthorathian commandant.

 

 

The Enclave of the Endlings

 

The Endling Refuge

Is not in Alphabetical order!

 

Hall of the Terminarch

Is not in Alphabetical order!

 

Jansa Vi Dero

Is not in Alphabetical order!

 

 

 

 

Deadline

 

Radical Peacemonger

"At the start of the game, put Deadline's villain character cards into play, Radical Peacemonger side up.

Search the villain deck for the card Atomic End-Glaive and put it into play.

Shuffle the villain deck."

 

 

 

Infinitor

 

Unstable Despoiler

"At the start of the villain turn, if there are no manifestation cards in play, flip Infinitor's villain character cards.

At the end of the villain turn, destroy the manifestation card with the lowest hp. Then, Infinitor deals H projectile damage to the 2 two hero targets with the highest hp."

 

 

Twisted Miscreation

"""The abomination hunts us. It is not enough to survive; we must destroy it.""

-The Naturalist, Cosmic Concurrence #21"

 

 

 

Sky-Scraper

 

Linking Incursion

"Switch to Sky-Scraper's Tiny character card.

Reveal cards from the top of your deck until 2 link cards have been revealed. Y you may put each of those cards either into your hand or into play.Shuffle the other revealed cards into your deck."

 

 

Thorathian Monolith

"""I am who you will fight. Leave my friends alone.""

-Sky-Scraper, Freedom Five Annual #3 10"

 

Undetectable Relinking

"Switch to Sky-Scraper's Tiny character card.

Put any number of link card in play back in to your hand.

You may play X link and/or Tiny cards now, where X = the number of link cards returned to your hand by this card."

 

 

 

Captain Cosmic

 

 

Cosmic Crest

"""Who put me in charge? No one, b . But someone must stand for the world.""

-Captain Cosmic,  Conflux #6"

 

 

Vitality Conduit

"Play this card next to a target.

After each time this card is dealt damage, the target next to this card that target regains 2 hp."

 

 
 

Kaargra Warfang

 

Bloodsworn Master side

"At the start of the game, put Kaargra Warfang's villain character cards into play, Bloodsworn Master side up.

Put the Bloodsworn Colosseum card in the center of the play area. Shuffle all the title cards to make the title deck. Put it below the Bloodsworn Colosseum card. Put the Crowd's Favor card below the title deck.

Shuffle the villain deck. Reveal cards from the top until a 1 gladiator card is revealed. Put it into play. Shuffle the other revealed cards into the villain deck."

 

 

Eager Combatent

"When flipped to this side, Kaagra Warfang gains 40 hp[color=red], . The heroes cannot win the game.

[/color]

When Kaagra Warfang would be destroyed, destroy any title cards under her cards and flip her villain character cards instead.

[color=red][s]The heroes cannot win the game.

[/s][/color]At the end of the villain turn, Kaagra Warfang deals the hero target with the highest hp H melee damage and the hero target with the second highest hp H minus 1 melee damage.

Then, play the top card of the villain deck."

 

 

Bloodsworn Collosseum

"Play the top card of the Title deck whenever any of these things occur:

*The start of the villain turn

*Whenever a target is destroyed

Whenever a Title card is discarded or destroyed, shuffle it into the Title deck.

Whenever a target leaves play, move any Title cards not under a target back to this area.

This card and the Crowd's Favor card are indestructible. This card, the Crowd's Favor card, and Title cards are not Hero, Villain. , or Environment cards."

 

Is not part of the Title Deck, it has a regular Villain Card back. Hmmmm, but the card itself says it is not a villain card… I think we have our first card that doesn't belong to any deck!

 

 

Bloodsworn Judgement

Fickle Fans

"Get back in there!"

Are not in alphabetical order, they are listed separately from the Gladiator cards for some reason. (other cards starting with "" in the title are listed before any A cards in other decks e.g. Chrono-Ranger and Expat).

 

 

Dymkharn the Fearless

"At the end of the villain turn, this card deals the two 2 hero targets with the highest hp 3 lightning damage each.

Whenever this card is dealt damage, this card becomes immune to damage until the end of the current turn."

 

"""You look pretty quick. I like that. Excellent. I hate boring fights.""

-Dymkharn the Fearless, Freedom Five #709"

 

 

Soulslayer Perith

"""Yesssssss, fresssh meat… Don't struggle too much, fleshling.""

-Soulslayer Perith, The Hero in the Arena #2"

Add a space between   and  Don't

 

 

None of the Titles have quotation marks around their names e.g. You have Title: Champion instead of Title: "Champion"

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Provactor Tarnis is missing a closing ", this is an actual misprint!

 
 

 

There's a few instances of inconsistant terms, (H) and H, HP and hp and Damage and damage (and damage types with/without capital letters), which one do you want in your document?

Currently Expat's RPG Launcher only destroys "Ongoing Environment cards".  Since I've never seen an Ongoing Environment card, this is probably a typo.