@evandan55 Hey, if you really need someone to take a second look at your script I can. I'm a tough critic (obvioulsy, i wouldn't insult anything i'd just offer suggestions) and as such I could help fine tune it.
After seeing Horus Ra carrying stone in Iron Legacy's prison, I looked at Haka's incapacitated side, does it look like Haka is carrying stone as well? Perhaps also in Iron Legacy's prison?
He certainly seems to be holding up a whole lotta stone. Whether he's in a prison or just keeping a hallway from collapsing isn't clear to me.